Personally I like the way it sounds now :)

Fantastic chapter, I'm so glad you updated...I was going to send an email but I didn't want to seem like a trouble maker. I'm actually thinking of writing a tumbler/oc once I finish a couple of my other stories

Ahhh you make me blush, thankyou. I was jumping in my seat when you said there was a new chapter and it was FANTASTIC. We found out more about Essence and the feeling between the two, not to mention she has a baby girl (cant wait to find out more about her and when the guys find out). You also introduced Chaosia and Otto was involoved in the chapter as well. You know how Essence likes fixing her car, maybe you could have the boys helping her fix something shes annoyed with, just for a scene to mix with Kip, Mirror men, etc. I understand about the updating, i didnt want it to seem like i was pushing...Anyway Update when you can but PLEASE dont leave it for awhile, good luck on the writers block hopefully some of that helped.

Sorry about the lack of reviews! I love it!

Hey i've been reading your story and really enjoyed it for so far! I, however, was wondering if you could perhaps write a little more about the crew? What has happened to them, especially with sway and memphis

Please update soon!

You wouldnt believe it, today i was thinking 'i wonder when the next update is, hopefully there is another chapter'. YOU are the best, it was a great chapter and it plays around with their realtionship and builds it. I cant wait to see the reaction of the team to the almost rape and i think you should have a scene showing the relatioship between the others like kip, etc. i wonder if she ever finds us about the boosts and what happened five years ago. The morning waking up would be a great scene to see between them. Please keep updating :) (hugs)

Hey, Not many reviews but keep up the good work, need a fresh story and this one is great. I love Essence and her personailty, the car, the dog, the protective brother, the jobs and the events that have happened are fantastic not to mention the building relationship with Atley. I love how you describe the story as i can see the characters doing those things, its like watching the you should have the cops asking her questions of something. BUT you should really keep writing...Update soon PLEASE

AWWW! *tear* Yay! its finally up!