IT'S THE END EVERYONE!

Aww that Epilogue was so lovely and sweet :) I had a feeling that 'box' in the first chapter would be a ring. And she said yes! :D

Great work :)

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Just to let everyone know - I don't steal books, books are awesome but I have no intention of stealing them :P

Haha I've got to say I loved my charater in this chapter, she was so funny and I DID love the Hungry Caterpillar! XD And yes Moriarty, I do need publisher...

The image of Sherlock tied to a tiny chair made me laugh, and the end was funny too :)

Bad-assry, is that a word? It is now! :D

A cheese factory is better than a library, thank you :P hehe!

Woop, Moriarty's Naisa's dad :P Although he creeps me out, so why I would see that as a good thing I'm not sure...

Good chapter, but I did get a little confused at the beginning - does Gina know that Naisa is Irene's daughter, because she had collected some of her DNA, but then she was shocked when her piture came up on the screen, have I missed something?

I've just realised the chapter names is how much time has past since Gina left XD

Sad chapter, poor Sherlock, at least he knows the reason why she left now :( but he's not the father! Someone needs to tell Gina that!

'almost a sob' D:

YAAY you put my idea in! :D You really built up the tension at the end, it was good :)

Poor Sherlock :(

This chapter has me in it, so it is automatically a cool chapter ;) you knocked me out tho, not impressed! :P

I like the Doctor Who refernce! :D

I was wondering when you might put this story up :)

This prologue's great, really gets into the emotions Sherlock is feeling :)

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Awesome start:D