Great work. I started reading this two or three days ago but I had to stop because I was in the process of writing my own Queen Serenity/Beryl story. It is interesting how our two stories had the same idea. Now I just have to type it up. Again great work on this.

I can not express how much I enjoyed this story. The wonderful insanity of it and its expertly descriptive images. It was incredible! The couple...one I thought only I pictured, their love story, again beautiful! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story. Perhaps at some time you might be convinced to right a story for this couple again? Please, consider it. Again, this was an amazing story. Thank you.

Wonderful, in depth, beautiful... it just... wow. I can't really say anything about it, other than great job. It just put you THERE with Beryl and...

poor beryl. No one loves her. :hugs beryl:

interesting take on the war. i always thought beryl attacked b/c she was in love with darien...o well, thats why its fanfiction. very nicely written. great job

*snort* And you scolded ME for advertising.

Well, I really liked this take on Beryl. It was pretty good. (Which is unusual because when it comes to the Moon Kingdom and all that jazz I'm a total Japanese manga purist.) It was a very good take on what motivations Beryl might have, something I know is challenging as I'm currently trying to finish off my own version of what happened during the Silver Millenium. It will be called "Our Kingdom Disdain" and I hope that you get a chance to read it as I think you might enjoy it. This was a great story and I'd love to see some more works by you.

that was awesome..i could really feel for beryl (as crazy and evil as she is!) well-done, bravo, cheerio mate! (lol...)

Forget Duke Nukem, hail to the QUEENS baby! Nice story you got there. Queens Serenity and Beryl have always been my absolute most favorite Sailor Moon characters ever of all time; Serenity as hero-I like her even more than her daughter in that role-and Beryl as villain. Having been raised on DiC's Negaversation of Beryl, one of the things that I've always like the most of these two is their duality. Serenity is the perfect representative of good and Beryl is the perfect representative of evil. Another thing that I've always liked is how the two are such personal enemies. Beryl says "I'll have Queen Serenity begging for mercy!" "Serenity you can't do this to me...you haven't seen the last of me!" As for Queen Serenity, do I even have to expalin why she and her family would hate Beryl? Beryl and Serenity, in the American version at least, remind one of the perpetual story of two siblings, one good, one evil. I've always liked this about them and was thus ecstatic on reading your story about how they were friends once, almost sisters, before they became bitterest enemies. Man, you're Beryl is the coolest, scariest, freakiest, most evil Beryl I've ever sen! Nice touch on Serena's dad too. But if only the story could have been longer and there was no combining of American and Japanese versions. But what the heck I like your story anyway!

Beutiful

Scary, but good. Frighteningly excellent writing.

::two thumbs up:: I loved it! I always wondered what made Beryl tick, and this certainly is the best idea I have heard! Of course, I have only seen Sailor Moon right after Moonlight Knight, considering they took it off Cartoon Network and WB. Darn...I miss that show

AWESOME! Never thought that Beryl would have a reason...well good stuff.. u should write more. Maybe about Nelelnia(dunno how to spell it) life before we knew her as evil. Ja

GoL

Interesting concept, Al!

WEIRD. that's about all i can say.