Reviews for Doll
Prim the amazing 2/15/13 . chapter 1
I really liked this Oneshot. Good job!
Adamantyne 6/28/12 . chapter 1
It was really good, I really liked it. The ending was disgusting and I felt so sorry for both of them.
I would prefer that you did not use parentheses, though.
mistralle 6/1/12 . chapter 1
Like a lash of a whip, really. A flash that burns into mind and stays there.

Thank you.
Viviane Renard 2/10/12 . chapter 1
I like the meaning behind your story. However, the copious amount of parenthesis gets a little distracting. That's my one constructive criticism comment, writing style-wise, otherwise I really enjoyed it!
Zollercoaster 2/3/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful.
anon 2/3/12 . chapter 1
Holy crap that was deep! Loved it! Nuff said!