| Reviews for Doll |
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Prim the amazing 2/15/13 . chapter 1I really liked this Oneshot. Good job! |
Adamantyne 6/28/12 . chapter 1It was really good, I really liked it. The ending was disgusting and I felt so sorry for both of them. I would prefer that you did not use parentheses, though. |
mistralle 6/1/12 . chapter 1Like a lash of a whip, really. A flash that burns into mind and stays there. Thank you. |
Viviane Renard 2/10/12 . chapter 1I like the meaning behind your story. However, the copious amount of parenthesis gets a little distracting. That's my one constructive criticism comment, writing style-wise, otherwise I really enjoyed it! |
Zollercoaster 2/3/12 . chapter 1Beautiful. |
anon 2/3/12 . chapter 1 Holy crap that was deep! Loved it! Nuff said! |