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Rose1948 12/29/11 . chapter 1
Intriguing for all its shortness yet begs to be continued.
Adeptis 3/2/08 . chapter 1
hm, good story, but sort of short...
Babs Yerunkle 10/22/03 . chapter 1
A great start. Like most of your fics, I'd love to see this continued. I see two ways for it to go, longer-term:

1) (Cat's Eye style) The trio maintains a secret shadow life of their own that weaves through the front-page action of Ranma. This gets particularly interesting if they are involved, from a different direction (they've stolen a scroll, or perhaps learned information about the Hibiki family, or uncovered important info on one of Genma's thefts)

2) Day of Reckoning. Somehow, one of the other main characters finds out, and things need to expand. Will it all unravel? With the shadow-society grow?

Anyhow, cool idea.
D-Chan3 5/16/02 . chapter 1
Oh, I like this story. Finally, the china teens are using their abilities to be sneaky and earn money...even if it's stealing from crooks!

This, I think, is a chance for Musse and Shanpu to finally realize their feelings towards each other. Maybe have them grow closer and have a law in there were if an amazon male saves the life of an amazon female that said male's claim takes precidence over an outsiders claim as a fiance.

I think that you need to leave more spaces between paragraphs and when the people are talking. Right now it is a bit hard to read so If you fix it then it would be even better.

Please continue!
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