|Reviews for Turnabout is Fair Play|
| stormkick 5/21/13 . chapter 15
So, I've already favorited the story. I love the premise, & and you're doing a great job of fleshing it out.
| couriosity 4/24/13 . chapter 1
your siren tale has called me back again. i just love this story!
| alex 4/16/13 . chapter 1
I'm not even going to start reading this bc you haven't updated since 2011... its 2013.. no way am I going to fall in love with this and it not be finished! No sir re bob
| Nemrut 4/5/13 . chapter 8
Here is the thing, I really dislike the premise of this story, for a few reasons.
The title and the character reactions seem to suggest that what happened to Kagome, now being forced to "sit" at Inu Yasha's command, is "fair" and makes them equal. And I am sorry, but I really don't see it that way. Inu Yasha without the curse and Kagome without the curse are not equals. One is a human who has some magical powers, but which are hardly that effective on Inu Yasha unless he remained still, while the other is one of the strongest beings alive, who is physically stronger, faster, more durable and basically better at anything that could count in a fight, except maybe for intelligence but even there, the difference is not so big or big enough that it would mean Kagome had any serious advantage there.
Curseless Inu Yasha can force Kagome to do anything and she wouldn't really have any means to defend herself unless she were willing to kill Inu Yasha and even then, she wouldn't be successful most of the time. Only when Inu Yasha had the curse, were the equal. Sure, Inu Yasha was way, way stronger than her, but one word and Kagome could bring him down. That ensured her return to her own time. It prevented her from being completely controlled by Inu Yasha's whims. It was less enforcing her will on someone else and more ensuring that she could exercise her own freedom.
So, when they both have the curse, the power shifted once again in Inu Yasha's favour and now he is controlling her and she can't really do anything about it.
Now Inu Yasha can make her do what he wants and he is cruel and petty enough to do so, while Kagome had the moral integrity to refrain from that. It makes it hard to see any fairness here outside the shallow "well, she did it to him, so now he can do the same to her" but she NEEDED that to be able to decide anything for herself.
Inu Yasha, while fighting on the side of good and having positive characteristics is not exactly that good of a guy. Sure, he is loyal, and brave but he is not that good of a person. So, I can trust Kagome to not abuse her power and she didn't. Sure, a few times sit was said because of Inu Yasha annoying her, but that is hardly the same as effectively preventing her from going home, or only going on solely his terms.
I guess what I am trying to say is, curse only on Inu Yasha made them allies and equals, curse on both makes Kagome a captive with Stockholm Syndrome because Inu Yasha doesn't "allow" her to go back on principle and she pretty much has to reason/beg with him to be allowed to go home.
I will continue reading this, to see if those issues are addressed or if this is going to continue with the assumption that Kagome "deserved" this but if this remains the same, I think I might drop it. Which is a pity since the writing is solid enough and Inu Yasha is written very well within his character, I just have a hard time believing Kagome would be so ... accepting of her fate. She is very empathic and noble and she would feel guilty for the unnecessary times she used sit but even she should feel anger, true anger and fear, since Inu Yasha effectively holds her hostage right now. I would expect her to say to Inu Yasha that if he truly wishes to detain her, that she would show some steel and say that she would consider that making Inu Yasha her enemy. That's the sort of thing that Inu Yasha himself wouldn't think of and shock him enough to think things through, other than "HA HA, we are even now, bitch". Because, in the end, Inu Yasha is not evil and he were to think things through, he would show reason.
Ah well, going to continue reading. Thanks for sharing this.
| Kaggybearr 4/4/13 . chapter 63
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! PLZ POST SOON!
| MikiMoo 3/23/13 . chapter 12
This chapter was amazing ! I couldn't keep my eyes off from it !
Thank you for a great update even though it was ages ago ! o
| Naoko Matatabi 3/17/13 . chapter 63
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please PLEASE write more! This story is too good not to finish.
| MissTalkitive 3/3/13 . chapter 63
I love this story. Keep on writing!
| DarkLilyAndRose 3/3/13 . chapter 34
Oh Gawd, embarresment xI
| DarkLilyAndRose 3/3/13 . chapter 29
Oh, he is hiding something else, trust me Inuyasha... xP
| Dark Inu Fan 12/3/12 . chapter 63
So, I wouldn't be surprised if the one 'shy' soul is an identical twin... or doesn't make it. At that stage, most pregnancies are multiples, and the weaker of the zygotes die off by the sixth week or so. With it being, what, the second or third week, nothing isn't even solid and guaranteed yet. And to think, most pregnancies aren't even detected by this early! For as long as you've been writing this story, I'm surprised it took this long for me to find this one! Keep up the good work, dark
| Surfy 12/3/12 . chapter 63
Come on! It's been a year since this post?! Nooo don't tell me you gave up on this story! It's so good. Please please please tell me you haven't abandoned it!
| Luna Silveria 11/30/12 . chapter 63
Awww! Three baby Inuyasha and Kagome combos! I can see them now (Dreamy Expression). Love your story write more fast k? _
| Sumire Jane 11/26/12 . chapter 63
OMG OMG i am loving this story! but maybe u could turn down the swearing just a little _
| Sumire Jane 11/25/12 . chapter 46
KYAAAAA OMG! they just CANT have a baby now! OMGGG stop being so evil! but on the other hand i would seriously KILL u if they did NOT have a baby!