Interesting take on Hermione and Winky. I liked this, it shows how much Winky cares for the Crouch's and Hermione's uneasiness about House-Elves. Good job I liked it.

Wonder who that was xD

I really like the way you pictured Hermione's typical sweetness to elves, Winky's panic as she desperately wanted her to get away, and the mention of invisible!Barty at the end… Really nice )

If I were Hermione, I would've blamed it on klutziness. XP cool way of incorporating Barty there. Oh wow I just realized you've hit your 200 story mark. Yay! :D congrats. Back to this story. Seemed very plausible. Awesome job! XD

Barty Crouch! I like this little missing moment - I bet Hermione would be kicking herself after the Third Task if this had happened!

Ohhhh! Yes another one! And Barty was in it :D

*hoping you write more with Winky and Barty* I love the love and care she has for her Master :)

Much love!

C.G.

Please continue this! )