I hope he goes back to Audrey and they talk: please update soon!

ohhh so much drama. Made my heart skip a beat a little there with Audrey and Jack at the bar. Keep up the good work, I'm excited for next chapter!

Okay so I just wanted to say how I like where you are going with this story... and I thought it would be rude to put it on my alerts without reviewing.

So please update soon because right now this is the only Jack and Audrey story I'm reading.

Hi again, I've been re-reading the first chapter and I wanted to say that I am really looking forward to the next post. This is a new approach to J/A story that I find quite intriguing; I hope they will manage to meet and talk, among other things, of what happened to Audrey when she was with her father during their kidnapping. I always thought it was one of the events from the show that would have deserved more attention but I never found any fan fiction dealing with it; still, I think that Audrey considering her own willingness to commit suicide with her dad to avoid exposing him to the terrorists' plan would have helped her understand Jack's actions with Paul, since they both found themselves in an extreme situation that called for extreme measures, and therefore maybe this could have been one of the reasons that helped with them reconciling later on in the story (other possible reasons, let's see... Jack's looks, maybe? yeah, I guess so). Anyway, I hope you will deal with this part of the story in this fiction, or in your other one that I also like. In any case, good job, and update soon

Yes! A new story! Thank you! And a very interesting start too Please update soon