D'aaaawww. Sweetness!

"Then I'll marry them next!"
Sure, why not?
XDDDDDDDDDD

Ooooohhh...someone's mom is PISSED...

...That wasn't supposed to happen.

My response to that statement: "Meep."

i don like the ending..

Saito is not a trained fighter. When he uses a weapon he gets instant expertise that fades as soon as he lets go of it, which is also the reason he was crap when the runes were gone. Training him, from what I can tell, is impossible as the Gandalfr.

Wasn't Matilda sending all of her money to Tiffania Westwood and her orphanage in canon?

Okay, I admit, I may have judged this story too soon in my last review. I laughed really hard at what saito did when he got back from the other world, it was really funny. Good job.

Hmm, just started reading, and not sure I like how this is going. I do not like to think of all the dark parts of their world, or even our own world. So I really don't like the idea of thinking that nobles can bed their servants whenever they want and not only does nobody have a problem with it, but it's an accepted right. Heck, if you've ever watched braveheart, this is what set off william wallas in the war against england. When some noble tried to enact his right to be the first to bed his bride on their wedding night, and killed her because she refused. Not exactly the same, but still. Anyway, I'm off to work, I'll read a bit more when I get home, but if it doesn't get better I'll stop reading.

lé friggin fantastic

Awesome story. awfull ending.

But good in a way, if u were runing out of ideas better ended when was good.

Looking for ur next story

So what happened to Saito and Louise?

Overall I love your story, but I must say that the ending killed it for me...changing the score from 10/10 to 4/10. No harsh feelings infact I look forward to your future story's its just that I hate endings like this.

Very cool