I like the way you showed the difference between Hagrid and Olympe when the lack of magic is concerned, and the way he viewed her was kind of sweet… The last line was really good. You did very well, for a Hagrid fic! D

Aww, poor Hagrid! Unrequited giant love!

OMG.

I loved this! I'm completely neutral about Hagrid and Mme. Maxine and never given them much of a thought in my life, but this was AMAZING. The way you described Hagrid's feelings (ew) and just your writing in general was GREAT.

Although that last line was the most disturbing thing in the world. P

Incredibly well done!