Absolutely wonderful! You're writing style is beatiful and I enjoyed the whole chapter. Please, write more Obidala-stories - PLEASE!

Mtfbwy,

Saskia

okay.. now -that- was unexpected.

Hey, I liked this story, although the ending could have ended in a cleaner way, but that's my oppinion. I've been reading Kate's stories, and she's been telling everyone to check out yours, and to review, so that's what I'm doing. I just stumbled apon this one while scrolling down the page, and since I liked Star Wars alot, thought I'd check it out. Well, I really liked your describing, and everything was laid out very nicely; making things very clear. Really great job! You have a talent for drawing the reader into the story, and holding their attention. Keep going!

Awww, that was very sweet. *tear* Very very good job! Keep writin'!

*Twix

Loverly story, Miss Gedia. :) Very sweet. I enjoyed it a lot.

Obi-Wan and Padme would definitely make a more interesting couple than Padme and Anakin...am I the only one who is COMPLETELY annoyed by him?

hey,

your fiic was good. a bit out of character for both parts, but still good cause you pulled it off.

saicho_18 : slytherin -

And one thing leads to another and...another...and in the end, Anakin turns all evil and cool! DARTH VADER! Does this review make snese?

I"m going crazyt...blahdfalkasdgjlkjadflkgahje rvn!

I thought this was incredibly sweet and touching. I loved it. Job well done )

wow, beautiful writing! I enjoyd it, and hope you write more!

Wonderful! I truly love this story!

Sara

Very well done.

I enjoyed it.

I said it before...

And I'll say it again...

Obi and Padme belong together...