Thanks for updating! Can't wait to read about the bachelor party Herb has in store!

Scratch that, I would hate to see Andy, Venus, Johnny, the Big Guy, Les and the guest of honor in a jail cell of Cincinnati's finest, Herb can rot for all I care {shows how much I hate the guy}.

I LOVE THIS. Andy's a little out of character, but Bailey's pretty spot-on. I really like your writing style, and I'm really excited for the next chapter! I'm happy you decided to continue this...it's such a promising storyline.

Letting Herb Tarlek plan Andy's bachelor party is a recipe for disaster. I do not want to think about the disaster to come. I sure hope the police aren't involved, and I would hate to see everyone {with the exception of the bride and matron of honor} locked up in the jail of Cincinnati's finest. What is Andy thinking? By the way, welcome back, and I hope to see more.

Hmmmmm...

Ok, Andy and Bailey getting married. I can see that She always was an understated beauty I thought.

I would just have them elope and come back and have a party/reception. Take Jennifer & Mrs. Carlson out, then Mr. Carlson, Johnny and Venus (leave Herb & Less in charge...OMG they'd think that was better than Christmas)

Then come back and party.

But you did good. A different take.

Rate: A

Wanna bet they wind up eloping, especially if Mama Carlson starts interfering? I think there are a few casinos and wedding chapels in Kentucky, which is across the river.

great story! I love the idea of bailey & andy together! I hope you continue! Excited to read more!