omg I FINALLY FOUND ANOTHER SATOU/TANESHIMA SHIPPER. LET ME HUG YOU. PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE.

The plot seems interesting. I would like to see how it progresses. You need to review the tense the story has been written in, though.

For instance,

The high school student looked up at him. Her face is flushed and has a few scratches; her innocent looking eyes stared back at his.

should EITHER be written as,

The high school student looked up at him. Her face was flushed and had a few scratches; her innocent looking eyes stared back at his.
(Past Tense)

OR

The high school student looks up at him. Her face is flushed and has a few scratches; her innocent looking eyes stare back at his.
(Present Tense)

The choice is yours. Otherwise, the story hooks the reader. Nice work there. Please do continue with it. I'll be waiting for the update. _

I'm happy to see a SatouxPopura story...actually I'm happy to see a Popura story at all, there aren't any here with her as a main character for some reason. But I really liked the way you introduced Popura into the story and hope to read more, thanks! Oh, and that part where Satou admitted he really needed her just makes me think back to episodes where he's always had to turn to her for help with his feelings for Yachiyo. ;_;

Yay a Satou/Tanshima story. I am interested in seeing where this will go.