I've said it before and I'll say it again, I love it when people come up with new angels and stories that I've never considered.

I really enjoyed your story. Have you two co-written any other stories?

Totally loving the ending right now, and yes, I'm thinking it leads quite well into the rest of the DA episodes. Just the effect with the card at the very end, definitely loving that. Whew, huge action in the last couple of chapters - had the perching-on-edge-of-seat thing going for awhile there... Ah, I love Alec so much. He's such a great guy in this story. You really do write him well. Loving the neutrality of the relationships in this one... we get the best of both worlds in this one because there's a lot of M/A interaction, and M/L undertones. It's fantastic! :-)

Whoa-kay, just had to leave a review. Logan isn't sitting well with me, but then again, that might be the point? He just seems angrier than he usually is, not quite himself, but then again, there's probably a reason for that. After the last few chapters, starting to feel pretty bad for Max. She's haunted by memories of Ben, and now she's having really bad days courtesy of Alec. Yeah, she didn't really have the right to give Alec a beating like that, but did he really have to screw around with her so much? Why can't you two just get along? Still love Alec though. That makes me less mad at him for screwing with Max, and well, she kind of deserves it. But dun dun dun, now she knows he's involved, and that ending really makes me want to read what's going on next and this review is just turning into a running commentary so I'll be moving on now... fantabulous work, you two. :-)

So I'm finally here and reading, and I'd just like to say that I'm already addicted. Absolutely love Alec and the way you're portraying him. The description is awesome - there's enough to give us a real feel for the characters/surroundings, but it's worked in well so that the attention is more on the plot area rather than the description. Just thought I'd point that one out because it stuck out in my mind. Especially love the paragraph where Max is coming up with reasons to justify her beating of Alec, but you get OC's voice in there shooting them all down. Anyway, just wanted to leave a note and say that this is really awesome so far, so I'm going to head onto the next chapter. :-)

Damn it - wrote a review, lost it in cyberspace, not sure if it will appear... so in short keep up the good work, don't be discouraged, looking forward to your next post.

I like Logan OK and think Max should be with him because that's the way the series was, but Alec's my guy.

You know, this is funny to say because you love Alec so much (don't we all) but you write Logan very well. It's as if I can see and hear him. Weird.

Oh no her Ninja!

This story really is a breath of fresh air; such an original plot line, well written too. Thank you and big hugs and kisses for posting it this fast. Of course this latest chapter has further fueled my need for more because I am so anxious to find out what Max's deal is.

A couple hours huh? It's late here but I just might have to stay up longer so I can see what happens next.

After 7 chapters I realize this is nothing but another one of your Alec fics. That's okay. I just wish you could be more honest. You lead us to believe it's going to be about Max and Logan.

We can get Alec stories everywhere. It's nice to see Logan once in a while.

This is so interesting. I really hope you update soon cause I'm hooked.

I'm counting on you to make this story perfect by the ending. Max and Logan together somehow, talking, knowing how they feel about each other.

You both are good writers who could do this.

Got to the end of chapter 5 and realised OMG no more pages. Please update soon. So many threads being juggled at once I'm curious as to how they will all come together.

I can't believe you would leave us hanging like that! I am dying to find out what happens next! Please tell me that there is going to be another part out SOON. I really love to see how you have expanded on what could have gone around in the background that they can't shoe on TV b/c of a time limit. but it would have been amazing if we could have see this. I can't wait to find out how you are going to have Max tell ALec about Ben. is it going to follow along with the show and be during Harbor Lights or are you going to have her tell him in the next part?

KEEP up the amazing work ladies!

hi. oh wow i love this story. its kinda confusing. is alecs plan to get max to rememebr ben? cos well yeah. but besides that the story rulz. post another chapter soon

oh interesting must continue.)

*she tried to unheard the sound of his voice*

Third paragraph, chapter 4. Bad use of unheard. Screws up the flow of your work. I'm assuming neither of you are English speaking, and are probably quite young, so you are doing a pretty good job except for a few things like this.

Work it out guys.

Thanks for your writing.