Alliteration actually made this fic more interesting. I tried to review it in alliteration, but I failed dismally. Great story!

so much alliteration!

I just love reading about Tom *sighs*

He is really ahh, I can't find words to explain.

But I love that he will control the ones that seek romance and how he is far away from those feelings :)

Much love!

C.G.

O.O that is a LOOOOOOT of alliteration. Even the TITLE is an alliteration! It made me laugh. Though the subject was very Tom-like. XD awesome job! (

I really loved the way you analysed people's needs in Tom's point of view, so coldly and matter-of-factly - it was like a scientist dissecating a mouse, lol. And you really did the alliteration thing well, it made your writing all the more elaborate and the result was pretty fascinating ;) really nice job!