Ugh! I soooo want the rest of this story. Wonderful plot building and fantastic writing!

I hate to see people give in to harrassment but I know this if supposed to be fun for authors too.

Why on God's Green Earth would Fan Fiction want to take down such a wonderful story?

is my yahoo email you can send new stories so I may be able to read them there. Your a favorite author of mine.

Lil so i have read another of your stories an now I know your going on my favorite list I didn't see the sex between them coming that soon but it's a good story to follow. So I will follow this one too

This is beautifully written. The descriptive passages are poetic and original, completely devoid of clichés. I know that takes work, so thank you!

I hope we will see some more... :)

loved it!

You have done very well with your plot with porn and selling the relationship. I can sort of believe the very stressed Dean might give up one night stands with drunken chicks for a relationship with Castiel who has shared so much with them. It's a pretty pair for sure!

Castiel needs to take up counterfiting or discover how to lift the old cash out of the banks where it's destroyed. If they're gonna try and keep Sammy doctored and comfortable they need to stay in suites and have money for prescriptions and counseling. It would break Sam's heart if he thinks he's keeping Dean from a relationship.

Your husband makes me laugh thinking us girls are all deprived and/or depraved lusting after Castiel and Dean but I'm sure he would find two women entirely understandable.

Wow! I love what you have written so far-really excited to read what comes next.

Gracious. you actually made me sign in to review. xD

I loved this story. Especially how you describe what their feeling. this one is somewhat common: "He [cas] heard the train rumble on the track nearby, but it could have been the pounding of his heart going wild in his chest." And further on...:"His breathing was loud in his ears like the rushing of the cars speeding by on the road outside." ;A; such good sentences. (is it imagery? Lawlz I'm in honors and I dont even know.) Oh and this is a good one: "Dean was a musician discovering a new found instrument, never before played. He used his hands and mouth to produce the correct chords from Castiel's voice." I was like: ;A; during one of my classes. It is so good. Amazing. Awesome.

First time writing slash? it did not seem like it at all. this was written like a pro. ;w;

Fantastic story. 3

I love this! So hot! XD

Angels ARE notorious for falling for the children of Adam, all the way back to the book of Genesis.

The boys had better let Sam know that Castiel is not dead and is traveling with Dean. He probably would like to know that Castiel did watch over him for a week.

Slash is not my favorite action for Dean Winchester but you do it pretty well and it would be off Dick Roman's radar.

*gulp*...soooo HOT!

can't type...must

pounce

on

Hubby

NOW!

OMG, OMG, OMG, I loved! this story. Please write another part I want to see more interactions between Cas and Dean.