Yeah... Naw, Just no. Yeah tragedy is a nice thing, well it's not but yeah you get what I mean, but, this is a little TOO TRAGIC. Aw poor person, Johnny died, I'm gonna try to kill myself. Again, naw. It doesn't work. Your character is just a little too wrapped up in their own life it seems. I'm not trying to be a bitch but trying to kill herself TWICE, man ISSUES see a mental doctor honey.

Anyway, bye!

All I have to say is...

Me gusta.

;DD

great story :)

Dannnng. I can't believe you don't have at least 300 reviews by now:o It's such a good story! Great writing!

OMG AWESOME. I LOVE IT!

I'd hate to see Johnny die, but I have to go with idea 1. It seems like it would make this story alot more thrilling/epic. Something big has to happen for the story to really hit it off, in my opinion. Love this story! Keep it up and good luck :) You're an awesome writer.

Ooooooh This is interesting! I hope Johnny doesn't die... :' Your next story sounds interesting too! Can't wait to see it :D

Wow, really nice story! I'd love to read more. I love the Ponygirl and Johnny thing going on, bringing each other back to life.

So, Johnny's birthday is March 1st? That's really close to my birthday :O Cherry's is closer, though. March 8th is a day after my birthday xD

Anyways, great fanfiction! I hope to read more.

i can tell that this is going to be a great story once you get some more chapters very interested in it. I don't see any grammatic errors (that was probably one right there) so i can only wish you luck and fav this story.

Peace and Luck to you

I think the story in a whole is very the thing that is bugging me is that Ponygirl, is a mary-sueish name. I mean it's nice that you put a play on Ponyboy's name but still. Other than that it was a very good story.

I love it! More please