hey that story was really good. i'm going to read the continuations now. some critique (hope you don't mind): i actually like heavy dialog chapters but i have trouble following yours since they are very long and sometimes it gets confusing who's speaking. and in the last chapter heero was very occ. he was occ at times before but it suited the story but at the end it was a bit too sappy. but the scene at the very ending was pretty funny where trowa finally gets that he had been disturbing heero with sth. (or rather so) the other day. also well done is wufeis monologue at the beginnings of some chapters. all in all you did a good job and this story deserves much more reviews. i'm going to add you at my faves since i hope you post more great stories.

tc, hellcat

Awesome. I loved it! :)

great fanfic. beautiful angst. fan tastic.

FAAAAAAABULOUS!

Very sweet.

oh, it's so beautiful! How did I ever miss this story up until now? I love th plot, the character interaction, and the way Heero has so much trouble expressing his feelings. And... poor Duo! I felt so bad for him throughout the whole story... (Sorry, I had to get that out!) I love it, and now I'm off to check out your other stories.

So far so good. The dilouge is a little confusing in some spots, though. Other then good story. It is kinda frustrating. I just want to lock Heero and Duo up in a room and say, "I'm not letting you out until you two work it out!"