This is amazing! Way better then the game! Please write more! I really need to know what happens! XD

Awesome chapter! I'm going to try to beat the totem poles even though I only have me,Lassi,and Mokka. I'm still going to try!

the bit where nadia remembered eric was so sad :( please tell us more about eric when you update next cuz he was cool :( i love this story plz update soon

Thanks for updating! :). I hope your dad is okay. I like that Nadia keeps having like flashbacks. I am hyperpink4 under a different account. Good luck and I'll keep you company by reviewing!

Are you gonna update soon? :(

I liked this chapter, thanks for updating! I think you summed up Razen well and added Nadia's own personality in at the same time. Other than a few minor spelling errors I can't find anything to complain at. P.(I just love those little smiley face things with their tongue sticking out P)

Are you gonna update soon? :(

I like how they get new spells based on emotion at a time. I 3 magical starsign and the original storyline. I like it when authors just add to the storyline vs changing up the whole entire thing. I like your next generation story too I was just afraid you were gunna ditch this one. I'll probably read it after this one is done so it feels like I'm reading a series. Keep up the good work! P

Gren was my favorite part too! I like how you can summarize parts of the game and pick out only the really important parts. If I tried to do that I would end up troubling myself over dialogue and making it forever. This was my favorite chapter by far :). I'm adding this too my favorites.

Great story, when you find Pico and Sorbet can you add more romance between them please? There was way not enough in the game...