| Reviews for Out of Silence |
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SelenesLegacy 2/8/12 . chapter 4Oh dear... I'm looking forward to chapter 5! |
AlexShah 2/7/12 . chapter 4They finally meet again. I'm quite worried for Veronica. Loki was being Loki, as always. Great job! |
Mac n' Meez 2/7/12 . chapter 4Yeah I definitely like Veronica 1st person POV best. It's a bit more fun to read, for some reason. *shrugs* Anyways, I love Loki being all, "I love you, and I won't kill you, but I will torture you just a bit.". He was so relaxed about the whole thing; completely in character. Great job! - Mac |
littlenerd 2/7/12 . chapter 4yay they meet again :) |
SelenesLegacy 2/6/12 . chapter 3ADFGASGFASD! This is so good :D But I feel sorry for Veronica when Loki finds her o.O |
Dangerously charmed 2/6/12 . chapter 1 I am so glad to see that you started a sequel :) I look forward to see how this is going to go :) |
littlenerd 2/6/12 . chapter 3yay cant wait until the next chapter! |
Mac n' Meez 2/6/12 . chapter 3Alright, let's start with my one and only critic: Coulson. CoulsOn. That's why Thor calls him the Son of Coul. That was my only thing. I loved it otherwise. Poor Loki. Hartsfield-Jackson is NOT a fun place to hang out at. And Tony falling asleep in class. :) Are you going to be doing this from 3rd person POV or eventually get back to Veronica's POV? Great chap! - Mac |
xX6Jenny-Bean9Xx 2/6/12 . chapter 2Love it, can't wait to see what happens next! |
Mac n' Meez 2/6/12 . chapter 2Yay! Sequel! How was that offensive to Southerners? I live in the South, and I didn't really see anything bad. Really though, just look at how we treat the Canadians. (Not that I don't like Canadians - my grandma was one). All I got from that was Loki getting into a stare-off with a cow. I liked how Veronica didn't really want to give up on Loki, but knows she should try because it was kind of a hopeless situation. I was afraid she might have gotten all depressed and obsessive, but you did good! You're off to another excellent start! - Mac |
SelenesLegacy 2/6/12 . chapter 2A sequel? Oh my god :D I love this, and I look forward to Loki finding Veronica! |
AlexShah 2/6/12 . chapter 2I can't wait for the next chapter and the future upcoming ones. Good job! So excited for this story :D |
Korvescence 2/5/12 . chapter 2So glad you did a sequel. Things are not going well for Loki so far. No one trusts him. I look forward to when he does find Veronica. I just know that isn't going to go well. Hope to read about that soon. Update again soon! |
littlenerd 2/5/12 . chapter 2yay youre back!update soon! |
RedRose252 AKA Mello the 2nd 2/5/12 . chapter 2Loki falling on his $$ then being sniffed by a cow (I have decided I want it to be named Herman) was one mental image I never thought I would see. Bravo! That was great. |