I will miss Tommy Falk. Poor guy.

I LOVED Puck's!

Wow, you've managed to capture the characters very well in such a short amount of words!

These are awesome! I have to say Matthew's was devestating and, ooh, Finn's just about made me smile too wide. Great job! :D You tell such big stories with such few words!

I was a little bit weary about this, but I am thoroughly surprised. I really think that you went about this at a very unique and amazing way. c: I really like this.

Beautiful! I love how you captures each character perfectly in eleven words. It's like an epilogue to the book- which I love because, as a rider, I thought that the book ended perfectly, but as a teenage girl, I wanted a bit more. Each little tidbit had it's own symbolism- which I LOVE in stories. My favorites would have to be Ian's part, although Sean and Puck would be tied for second.

Looking forward to some more Scorpio fanfiction (*hint hint*)!

Dani

I love clever qriting :)

Loved Ittt! Please write more on this book! You really know the characters! :)

I think this is a really clever idea! You did a fantastic job of creating an actual story with just a few words, and every single sentence worked fit each character perfectly. I absolutely ADORE Ian Privett's sentence. I'm not sure what it is exactly that makes is so perfect, but it really is! I hope you write more for the Scorpio Races :)

Aaahhh the first one just killed me. Brilliant. Took me a minute, but once I got it I freaked out in a fit of heartbrokenness. So beautiful. I'm so glad there's Scorpio Races fanfiction out there, especially good stuff. Thank you for making my day.

Great Job! Please do more!