Hey. What's with you? You haven't updated this since APRIL. This is now OCTOBER. UPDATE. Seriously! It's not fair for us, the readers, when you write good stories and then leave them there! I happen to like this story, and want to find out what happens next. Sadly, I cannot do that until you UPDATE.

Why doesn't she just tell them she's a noble? They'd probably let her go.

And this is why you're not supposed to follow cute boys random places.

thanks for the mention lol and if the grammar is bad when it posted well it all the betas fault lol

YES! You FINALLY UPDATED! please update again soon!

Awesome! I love it, I daydream Neal/Kel fic's.

4.9 stars

Again awesome! :)

i love this story

update soon

i feel like i should be telling kel to never trust your kidnapper! no matter how charming, maybe especially if they're charming, that's the sign of a sociopath! i can't figure out what neal was doing though, why didn't he tell anyone what he suspected? and i am glad that nothing too bad is going on with kel, just kidnapped

Thanks for updating!

update again soon!

You need to UPDATE! I want to know what happens to Kel and Neal!

Dude! You can't just leave a cliffhanger like that! And what the hell do you mean by "what they're going to do to her"? Yeah an you better make it a Keal story! Oh by the way Neal should "come to her rescue" and with Kel just about to get out of there and then have her save the day! BTW what happened to Crown I thought she was on Kel's shoulder?

Shazam!

This is a good storyline so far )

Keep writing!

Sincerely,

WarriorKnight

That sounded really good, can't wait to hear what happened next.

Just when I was feeling really depressed because there aren't any new TC fanfics that I haven't read yet, I turned to Kel...

I am so glad that I did. This story is brilliant and I can't wait for more!

Please update soon!

Alyss Mainwaring

This seems pretty interesting, please update soon.