Wow, you've gotten my interest! Keep up the good work and update soon :)

please write more

Wonderful job! Please update soon!

I laughed at the irony when I turned to this story i was listening to angels and I was like oh wow im listening to that hehe now ive actually gotta read this!

This is intriguing and I'm surprised you don't have more reviews. Beatrice is a very realistic character, the kind everyone can relate to without being a Mary-Sue. That can be quite challenging at times. I was also very interested in the juxtaposition between the first part of the chapter and latter part. I'm excited about this now and can't wait to read more!

Good start. Please continue. It was well written as well.