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Captain Arbitrary 2/7/12 . chapter 1
That was flufftastic! Very cute :) I knew Cloud wouldn't forget! I love these Strife family fics so very much. Happy Birthday, Aerith!
BehindTheseCivilizedEyes 2/6/12 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh... Q-Q

I thoroughly and undoubtedly loved every inch of that one shot. I love strife family fics and this one was just-over flowing with so much cuteness, I am not even kidding when I say this but this is my favorite Aerith birthday fic and even moreso my fav valentine's day fic EVER T_T

I loved every little detail, from the description of their house, that they're married!, and that they already have two kids together. The dog... it's a girl named Vincent! That is so fluffy and so sweet and unique I just-ugh, my heart it aches with happiness. The whole time I read I couldn't stop smiling or covering my cheeks outta happiness.

oh my god, I literally reread Cloud's entrance like six times-it was so cute, so quirky and so sexy too!

**Cloud let out another sigh before asking in inquiry after clearing his throat "The boys?" she answered absent minded after hearing that "The dog." she sighed before jumping in surprise at realizing it was her husbands voice that called to her.**

that was sooooooooooooooooooooooo cutte! I love how natural it was to read that-it was as if I watched it happen and not like I read it... and that's just blimey brilliant. The best part about that part was how in character it was and I love how it made me feel as if I had watched this married couple go through things like this a hundred times beforehand-I can't say anything else other than it was very homey and very familiar. that one little paragraph managed to give the feeling as if the reader had the privilege of watching their entire married life together and that's really hard to achieve in one shots.

Oh, and the part where Cloud caught her-*le sigh* my heart strings were pulled so much. Oh my lord, and the small little detail of having Aerith say that it was both our faults cuz neither could NOT blame themeselves-ugh too sweet. But the sexy part where Cloud smiled at her all close to her and they were about to kiss but then sora and roxas interrupted them, that made me sqeeee so hardddd I had to cover my mouth with my hand to stop myself. And I loved the little detail that you included of Sora and Roxas standing on Cloud's feet, SO CUTE!

Oh, and my ovaries totally blew up when I read: "Cloud scooped his sons up, one in each arm."-something about picturing Cloud as a father is just so sexy.

But I completely melted in my seat when I read that Cloud was rubbin' her shoulders-so sexy *drools* but that necklace... it sounds absolutely gorgeous and I love how Cloud gave her the gift. And I love the cute awkward cough of Cloud's when he turned Aerith's face to the door where Sora and Roxas were.

And I laughed soooo hardddddddddddddddddddddddd when Roxas said "are you guys playing zombies" I could just see the awkward looks on their faces as they laughed it off and said yes.

Seriously, I loved this so much. I think I'll reread this about a gazillion more times before my fangirl days are over.

(ps. sorry if I sound like a babbling fool, this is me in my fangirl state, thankyouverymuch)

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