|Reviews for Finally|
| rayliz793 2/14/13 . chapter 1
| Lily Nadesico 2/14/12 . chapter 1
Not a bad start, I'd say. However, I think you should watch out for punctuation, which is rather poor... and I think you should be a little more descriptive in your scenes.
Other than that, though, it's off to a good start! As a Koichi/Emi fan(girl), I wish you good luck and hope you'll continue it.