Nooooo! You have writer's block! :(

Maybe the plot can be that Meadow is in terrible danger with sickness, but she is in the secret place and couldn't move. Sorren didn't want to reveal his special place, so he has to take care of her secretly every day. Then a storm comes...

That is just a thing you can do. I really love this story! I'm also writing a Bambi Story, but I don't think I want to publish it in FanFic 'cause everyone will think I'm crazy... because Bambi and Faline are... well, not ENTIRELY White-Tailed... I said too much. Toodles, and GOOD LUCK!

WHY ARE YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOO MEAN MEADOW?! Oh, and poor Sorren... so easy to anger... I will be checking up on this.

you are so like me maybe i will get the courage to post something i don't have much skill but still

- superheroanimegeek

Awwwwww! That's IT? I was completely SUCKED INTO the story! More, MORE, MOOOOOOOOREEEEEE! ... Please? Get more chaps up! No wasting this story!

Great story! I would really like to se a jealous Sorren, that would be very sweet to read about. (Just like Bambi and the other deer hade a fight in the movie)

Keep updating! You write very good

really like how you write about Meadow. Question, do you already know about how many chapters this story will contain? Just curious...

oh, so sweet! Females and their games! The poor guy. Sorren will have a bad headache and won't get a second of sleep! *laugh*
;)

Bambi/Ronno my eye. This is MUCH better.

And amazing.

Although I have to say that your beginning chapters were almost better than these later ones; I'm sorry for you having so few reviews - this deserves many more. There are a few grammar mistakes you made; such as the comma before names or titles, but it really WAS good.

MUCH better than my first fanfic. :D Honestly, you do have a lot of promise. Please, keep up the good work, and I shall be checking in on this.

Thank God this fandom isn't entirely saturated with gay people... o.o

L

your story is very beautiful. I really like it!

I've been meaning to review this for a while, it's really sweet. This chapter sure makes it clear that between Sorren and Bambi, the latter is blessed with the better father. I have ALWAYS loved Bambi 2. This is excellent. Keep up the good work.