Great story! I really enjoyed how close to cannon everything was and how well plot lines were tied in together. Your description was excellent, however you could have used richer words at times. To help you improve on this skill, I'd like to recommend you to www . rmimagic . com (minus the spaces). it's a role playing site for talented authors like yourself to write their own characters and and improve your writing skills. Please check it out-we'd love to see you around!

Aww. :D Very cute. Great job! Keep writing! -Emma

This was so immensely brilliant. I think you got Arthur and Molly perfectly and it was so sweet! Great job :)

Aw, that was so sweet. Wonderful. Loved it.