Oh, Gods. I'm SO glad I can finally get these fics of yours :) Because it helps me enjoy a lot more whatever you're writing about them :3 XD Anyways. I loved it. Dunno, I've been loving your written voice for a long time now but, as I told you before, now I can hear it quite clearly :) I love the way you make them interact with each other and I also love all the inner thoughts you write in there and how you use metaphores in order to set an atmosphere :) That's pretty cool! :D

I also don't think Erik's THAT OOC... I think he's all passionate and so in love in here XD That's why he looks slightly different. Besides, I think one can tell he'd be like that with the people he'd really care about u.u Or dunno. Maybe that's just my fangirl conception XD

So, after all this, I only have to say: Good work, hun ;)