Adorable fic, I loved it. But just to inform you, Karuto is male. It's Killua's young brotherr... xD I know, he so looks like a girl (I thought so too before) but in the Chimeara ant arc it's made clear that he's a he! xD

Togashi Yoshihiro somehow really likes to make very feminine persons males... Good example is also Kurapika and Pitou... (Pitou from the Chimeara arc..)

Though im sick of ur japanese, the story was good! I can feel the struggle of love here! Xie xie for your story!

loved it _! loved the fluffyness and hey the japanese words were awesome! sory for the late review but yeah great work is always appreciated!

GR WHY KILLUA AND GON!WELL IF ONE WAS A GIRL THEN YES BUT..OMG THERE BOYS FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!IF YOU REPLACED GON WITH A GIRL I'D BE ALL LIKE O YYEA I LUV THIS FANFIC!IT WAS GOOD THOUGH BUT NEXT TIME PPLZ DONT MAKE THEM UUH I DONT LIKE TO SAY THE WORD WHEN 2 DUDES LIKE EACH OTHER BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN OK?

Hey, i like your story! it's nice

So cute! Killua and Gon...now that's what friends are for! And Caruto's so sweet! What i really want to say is...GREAT FIC! :P

AHH! I SO LOVED IT!

Awah! How sad/sweet!

Angsty but so cool!

This was a really good story, but if you're going to use Japanese, the _least_ you could do is make sure the words are _spelled_ right.

Errors, in order of appearance:

"Ie" means picture; "IIe" means no.

"Wakata" - The correct spelling is "Wakatta".

"Oji" means uncle; "Ojii" means grandfather.

"Ni" means two (and a few other things as well); "Nii" means brother.

"Imoto" - The correct spelling is "Imouto".

A two day wait? I'm sure Gon can last longer than that! Though I have to take into account how long it would take to get back...

This was so cute! _ Please write more soon!

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oh that was so sw3eet and adorable and everything! really so cute and...well, I think you got the point, ne? ;

Great work. Keep it up sexy. *grin*

Suteki da ne... *_* LOL.. very fluffy-reading the title, I half expected someone to die, but yay! D Happy ending... LOL... can't wait to read what the bigger part is, yah? D

men you rock. i love this fict. ill be looking forward for the next.