Very nice! I love the idea of plotting Bert. :)

aw! such a nice episode with jane and gavin!

not many tear jerkers in this chapter? the level is high enough for me...

another great chapter. its really sad to see how marys and berts relationship has changed, but the way you write it, its perfectly understandable. makes one just wish more for them to find their old friendship... and maybe something more... yes, mary needs to figure out her job this time!

oh man. *heart clenches*

my heart goes out to bert here, seeing how he tries to get by... hes so brave, in a quiet, undramatic way.

i congratulate you on your courage to not let bert get away unscathed. horrible as it is (even more so with this cheerful character), it does justice to the great tragedy the first world war was and the impact it had. so well done. also, i very much liked the conversation between bert and robby here, nicely done. also very nice the bit where bert start to talk about mary...

*snf* that was truly touching chapter. you have a way with words and a good handle on the character, to make one feel whats going on without being mushy or melodramatic. good job. really good job. poor bert.

Awwwwwwwww...You don't know how many times I said that. THIS IS ADORABLE!
And very well written. Putting aside the minor grammatical and spelling mistakes, the writing was perfect. There were plenty of details, but not too many, and I liked the format you wrote it in. Thank you for writing.
:)

Very good! I really enjoyed it!

Oh gosh. This is just... just... This is practically perfect.

Really.

My goodness. Mary Poppins Seal of Approval for you, my dear.

I love that Mary and Bert are obviously perfectly happy. I love that Bert's plotting. I love that Mary knows when Bert's plotting.

I just... Ugh, this perfect. Just perfect.

I wish I could come up with better words to make my point but I can't. It's perfect.

Also, this: "Ewww!" Jerry complained. "She's gonna kiss him now!" That may be my favorite thing in the history of EVER.

I want that sequel like yesterday! Please?

Can I hug you? Like really? I want to hug you for this.

It's been a wonderful read well done! And a nice way to round things off :)

This was a beautiful story! I loved every chapter. Very well done and I hope you write much more in the future!:)

Such a lovely ending! So sweet.

How soon will the sequel be up?

Let's see, a point-by-point review:

1) There's a typo in the Michael section. You are normally pretty good about things like this, but saying, "Bgut" instead of "But" is all the more jarring because of it.

2) The wedding was so good! I was so happy, and the Jolly Holiday bit-I need to smile, I just read The Hunger Games!

3)Yay for Gavin and Jane!

4) Poor Robby :( I hope it works out with him and Olivia.

5) Thank you for keeping things as vague as possible for the night! I can handle Rule 34 in practically anything BUT this fandom! Besides, the last few lines are just so sweet!

7) You said there would be a sequel, yes?