 Evee.Lynn 5/6/11 . chapter 2I know it's been 9 years, but it feels as if I've been reading your work since the very beginning.
I do hope you've continued with your writing, whatever genre it may be, as you're obviously incredibly talented. But of course, if you ever find yourself with nothing to do on a rainy afternoon, please consider returning to FFVIII? It'd make plenty of people mad with unbridled glee. :) |
 deleted and inactive 12/2/06 . chapter 1I'll be watching for more chapters - this is a good story.
Sorrel |
 deleted and inactive 12/2/06 . chapter 2Good writing - i like this story a lot. It's realistic and shows them maturing a bit!
sorrel |
 Jayliyah 12/27/05 . chapter 2I love this, I love your writing... please continue! |
 Luis Sergio 10/16/05 . chapter 2 Wow, incredible, awesome. Hope to see an update soon. And to know what hapen in Squall/Rinoa relationship. |
 Romantic 4/9/05 . chapter 1I love Squall x Rinoa stories. |
 xRachelx 12/15/02 . chapter 2You are so bloody brillant! My goodness you are awesome! This is brillant! You are fantastic!
*clears throat* Yes erm well anyway I love the way you can get so much feeling into your stories I am quite jealous at your writing ability.
Anyway you must complete this! You have to! You can't just stop there with both Rinoa's and Squall's life hanging in the balance! It's going to be MY death!
Merry Christmas
Rachel (lunar-girl) |
 Iaya R. White 9/18/02 . chapter 1CONTINUE! |
 Akemi Akibi 7/20/02 . chapter 2Is it me or does Rinoa die/get hurt alot? I mean, I know not everyone likes Rinoa but come on!
*sighs in defeat* Fine, you people can go on and kill Rinoa if you like and get Squall all depressed and stuff.
*sighs again*
Oh well. adios!
-Akemi Akibi a.k.a. The Green Sonic Monkey |
 Vick330 6/12/02 . chapter 2An unexpected and poignant turn of events. I am always impressed by your writing style. Well done. |
 beamy 6/12/02 . chapter 1 Your characterizations are perfect! _ Nice suspense, and good story as well. I adore the way you write, but I think you aleady know that.
What did Squall write to Rinoa? *pulls out hair*
beamy |
 Iaya R. White 6/7/02 . chapter 2This is great! I can't wait for the rest! |
 Witch Baby 5/23/02 . chapter 2Nooo! Poor Rinny(
This story is awesome so far! I can't wait for the next part. Hmm, constructive critism, I suppose just adding a bit more detail in places, show not tell, ya know? Well I hope you write more soon! |
 Angelprinczess 5/22/02 . chapter 2Love it, love it, love it, love it, love it! This is EXCELLENT! You have to update soon! |
 JessyNick 5/22/02 . chapter 2Good story, i really like how you captured their feelings, please continue!
Jess |