i loved it but at the same time i kinda hated it too! woo! thats talent! XD XD so was she looking toward the place where the shimmering island was? :o gasp! no! dont go! Jaileen might die

you said that this story is complete, no? then why doesnt it have a complete tag on it? :(

A supreme piece of fiction. You lovingly capture the inherent innocence of Melody and her view of the world. I hope you write a sequel to this. :)

This is a very good story indeed.

Very impressive how you capture the images of Gaia and put them down on paper.

Nice work hope to see more work coming from your side.

I really like this, I hope you finish it. I hope they find Kuja.

Thanks for reviewing and I think your story is good. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow this is a great start I relly like so far Please I hope you continue on with more soon _!