oh wow

what an awesome start for this shitty day

I enjoyed this chap even more than the second part, I love how Ace realized what he like, and how Marco played with him [damn what a self controll].

[fuck Ace begged */A/*]

you have no idea how much I wait for the next part!

Wouldn't it be 'Commander Izou' and not just 'commander Izou' ?

Anyway, I love how easily Marco can take over Ace. He's such a tease. :P

ooh Marco is such a tease! What will power he has to throw Ace out of the room.

And here I am blushing again from another of your smut scenes.

wew ace never knew you were such a machocist hahahaa..sadistic marco oh the go loves it love the way you portray himxD even though hes a bit scary:3 buut nicee thanks for the update was excited to know whats next

oh god.

how to describe what I feel. I dunno. oh god Marco spanked him he just did that in most awesome way, he didnt even need to cause much pain,the whole thing was on other level

you have no clue how i enjoyed it, and god Ace enjoyed it! he fucking did!

he loves it how Marco stronger,and he got so aroused from whay he did */A/*

man you make me so hungry with those little touches,I want the next part so bad!

thanks for the awesome piece */u/*

[btw I didn't forget your other fic,I just wait till there more chap or 2 so I can read it all together bcuz I can't handle the thought of waiting week week to see my bbys suffer ;3;]

Wow did I blush reading this...

Interesting insight into Marco's history, got me all aquiver.

'Sea daddy' remains a term that I can't seem to regard seriously. I mean, no way can I take it seriously grown men calling someone 'daddy' with out some roleplay being involved.

All in all, thank you for the chapter!

This is such a great story so far. Making Ace run back sans shorts to his room was awesome! I think I got a little nosebleed from that spanking scene.

Can't wait for the update :)

LOL big bad daddy hahhaxD he really is scary LOL runs away nah still loves him- hahahaa poorpoor ace pride striken down to the bits LOL anyways thnx fr the updates

oh omg I waited for this fic long time now * u *

the first part just awesome!

I love how you wrote Marco so dangerous but I'm sure he have his soft size,right D

I loved the plot and the writing very much !

but god such a tease for the rating you said will be !

can't wait for the next part !

I truly appreciate the note of danger Marco has here. I can feel it clearly and it's something that is often left out from his characterizations in stories. I'm surprised with his apparent self-disguist and am curious how that will come into play.

All in all, you got me hooked again. Thank you.

I also hope you won't soften it too much from your first plan or that you will post the original somewhere.

aiksx xmarco seems so scaryxS LOL ace pantss got ripped trolololxD haha nice work!:) was rolfing LOL hahaha aces pridex x anyways update soon: hehe

I'm excited. All of your stories are so good.