|Reviews for The Maiden of Darkness|
| hatmanthehat 12/22/12 . chapter 1
omg wat did i even red? shes such a mrty sue. u ues 2 many ajectivs an aslo stup paring ur self wit ed. hes wit wrinry. jeez, aslo u dont deserv him.
presonely, u shud haet urslef. u cuda ritten a grate wriny/ed sotry useing de same sotry, but insted u had 2 use self-inert mart sues.
| Guest 8/12/12 . chapter 4
Aren't you going to finish the story? Please continue writing this story. I would very much like to know how it ends.
| Rose With 2 Sides 4/15/12 . chapter 4
I love this. But a, why do you hate your self? pls update soon
| Chichi4mangaHero 4/7/12 . chapter 4
Awsome story,very original :D can't wait for more
| animefreak653 4/5/12 . chapter 4
Dont hate urself! this is a good story! have some faith!
| LeFay Strent 3/18/12 . chapter 5
Oh m, God! She is so crazy! She rolled down the hill, got bruised up, and decided to roll down again. lmao, that sounds like something I would do. Speaking of, I want to go roll down a hill now.
| LeFay Strent 2/18/12 . chapter 3
Wowzers! I read this chapter with a grin on my face the entire time. Love it!
| HagarenKokoro 2/17/12 . chapter 2
You're a good writer, but I don't really like FanFic where people submit themselves into their stories...however, I'm sure a lot of people will diagree with me, seeing as this was well-written and really interesting, and you sound like a cool person. But maybe if you wrote about a fictional girl who fell off her bed and landed in the FMA world? I think that would make a better story.
| Grey Distortion 2/17/12 . chapter 3
hahaha, I laughed out so much at the rape part! keep up the good work :)
| FullmetalLover 2/16/12 . chapter 3
*Gasp* THIS IS SUCH A FRIGGEN AWESOME STORY SO FAR!
Please update soon.
| LeFay Strent 2/11/12 . chapter 2
O.O This is so cool! I love how she's trying to stay away from the main characters. You always see stories where the person is trying to find the main characters. This is refreshing.
| Ed's.Curious.Kitten 2/9/12 . chapter 2
Good work! Please update soon!