omg wat did i even red? shes such a mrty sue. u ues 2 many ajectivs an aslo stup paring ur self wit ed. hes wit wrinry. jeez, aslo u dont deserv him.
presonely, u shud haet urslef. u cuda ritten a grate wriny/ed sotry useing de same sotry, but insted u had 2 use self-inert mart sues.
go di

Aren't you going to finish the story? Please continue writing this story. I would very much like to know how it ends.

I love this. But a, why do you hate your self? pls update soon

Awsome story,very original :D can't wait for more

Dont hate urself! this is a good story! have some faith!

Oh m, God! She is so crazy! She rolled down the hill, got bruised up, and decided to roll down again. lmao, that sounds like something I would do. Speaking of, I want to go roll down a hill now.

Wowzers! I read this chapter with a grin on my face the entire time. Love it!

You're a good writer, but I don't really like FanFic where people submit themselves into their stories...however, I'm sure a lot of people will diagree with me, seeing as this was well-written and really interesting, and you sound like a cool person. But maybe if you wrote about a fictional girl who fell off her bed and landed in the FMA world? I think that would make a better story.

hahaha, I laughed out so much at the rape part! keep up the good work :)

*Gasp* THIS IS SUCH A FRIGGEN AWESOME STORY SO FAR!

Please update soon.

O.O This is so cool! I love how she's trying to stay away from the main characters. You always see stories where the person is trying to find the main characters. This is refreshing.

Good work! Please update soon!