I quite enjoyed reading this story but I have to agree with the other reviewers.

This needs another chapter!

Thank you for writing. I want some mochi now! :)

The only thing I dislike about this story is that it isn't longer, I feel like it needs a second chapter to finish up the conversation. I mean, we didn't really get to see very much on their interactions together- didn't get to know how they fell for each other... Other than that, this was a great story! _v

This was really sweet... kinda like mochi, I guess I really thought the ending with Kakashi and Sakura was really cute, especially when he pulled her back into that hug ;)

Also when Sasuke finally had that sort of epiphany I guess about Sakura, when she held out the mochi to him like her affections. Idk I am usually awful at symbolism. Was she doing the same to Kakashi in a way? And thought he was ignoring her efforts and thus it 'wasn't about the mochi', but her feelings or something. I'm bad at this. But I can appreciate it nonetheless!

I almost want another chapter but it's succinct and tied together right there, once one lets it turn over in the mind a bit it all comes together and feels whole right as it is. :)

Absolutely great fic, I think that you have done Sakura's character perfectly! The fic is written really well, and it's great that the mochi is pink and green, it's like it's saying Kakashi and Sakura :) you ended it on a perfect 'yeah Sakura!' Moment as well. Keep writing!

Kashi-Cookie-Monster

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