|Reviews for The Month Off Job|
| ElizabethMarieBennett 5/21/13 . chapter 16
can't wait to read more!
| tvj12 5/10/13 . chapter 16
I loved your heist...the way you explained their movements was very much in the same style as the show-you did a great job capturing that! -tvj12
| jjgeraghty 5/9/13 . chapter 16
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read what happens next!
| Fostersb 5/9/13 . chapter 16
Very funny and creative chapter. I love how Parker has Eliot wrapped around her finger, but that he is trying to show her how he can be a good boyfriend. I think since Parker never had these experiences, she doesn't have many expectations and therefore Eliot should just be himself. Still it is very cute, funny and sexy to see their relationship grow.
| Hips 5/9/13 . chapter 16
I just love this fic! Such a fantastic chapter! I love that Eliot is really trying to give Parker a relationship. I can't wait to see what happens next and how their relationship progresses! . 3 3 3 Great work as always.
| floralisette 5/9/13 . chapter 16
"How many dates do we have to go on before we can have sex?" Yay, Parker! Rofl!
| liferscove2118 5/9/13 . chapter 16
nice work on the update.
| Angel JJK 5/9/13 . chapter 16
Cool. Sweet. Look forward to more.
| angeleyenc 5/8/13 . chapter 16
hehe! great story! oh Parker.. :D
| Sci-fi Christian 4/28/13 . chapter 15
I liked the plot at the beginning of this, and I loved the Eliot/Parker moment at the end! It was totally them! Great job! Can't wait for more! :D
| Angel JJK 4/28/13 . chapter 15
Sweet Eliot and Parker at the end. Til next time.
| jjgeraghty 4/28/13 . chapter 15
Love the interaction with Eliot and Parker! Can't wait to read how the 5 of them take down this company!
| kt8a 4/28/13 . chapter 13
I am loving this fic. There's one problem with this chapter: in the introductions of the family, you say that Peter is both a detective and a mechanic. It doesn't look like you meant to give him two jobs. Which is he?
| Fostersb 4/28/13 . chapter 15
Great chapter- I do appreciate that there are always Parker/Eliot bonding moments in the chapter. It is a good think that Sophie has to be this guys date, or Eliot would have gone crazy. Then again a jealous Eliot is kinda cool.
| angeleyenc 4/28/13 . chapter 15
aww! so sweet! great story! can't wait for more!