can't wait to read more!

I loved your heist...the way you explained their movements was very much in the same style as the show-you did a great job capturing that! -tvj12

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read what happens next!

Very funny and creative chapter. I love how Parker has Eliot wrapped around her finger, but that he is trying to show her how he can be a good boyfriend. I think since Parker never had these experiences, she doesn't have many expectations and therefore Eliot should just be himself. Still it is very cute, funny and sexy to see their relationship grow.

I just love this fic! Such a fantastic chapter! I love that Eliot is really trying to give Parker a relationship. I can't wait to see what happens next and how their relationship progresses! . 3 3 3 Great work as always.

"How many dates do we have to go on before we can have sex?" Yay, Parker! Rofl!

Lisette

nice work on the update.

Cool. Sweet. Look forward to more.

hehe! great story! oh Parker.. :D

I liked the plot at the beginning of this, and I loved the Eliot/Parker moment at the end! It was totally them! Great job! Can't wait for more! :D

Sweet Eliot and Parker at the end. Til next time.

Love the interaction with Eliot and Parker! Can't wait to read how the 5 of them take down this company!

I am loving this fic. There's one problem with this chapter: in the introductions of the family, you say that Peter is both a detective and a mechanic. It doesn't look like you meant to give him two jobs. Which is he?

Great chapter- I do appreciate that there are always Parker/Eliot bonding moments in the chapter. It is a good think that Sophie has to be this guys date, or Eliot would have gone crazy. Then again a jealous Eliot is kinda cool.

aww! so sweet! great story! can't wait for more!