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ukyohibiki 4/7/12 . chapter 6
This is such a great story! I check it every day, hoping for an update *hint hint*
JeremyGU 2/22/12 . chapter 6
WAFFy chapters are great when they're balanced by chapters that are less so, which this one is. I liked it a lot. Per principal Kuno: he came along much later. Tatewaki came in at the very beginning, Kodachi came along a few chapters later, and the principal came along in volume 12. The first chapter of the story arc is called "Return of the Principal"; there's a website called AnyManga that has online manga for free (ads-based I presume). Again, great chapter, this story is coming along well.
tuatara 2/22/12 . chapter 6
Good stuff again! Glad to see Nabiki getting her bearings back and taking some initiative.

The reminiscences were really sweet, and I dig the idea of Kuno having spent many hours playing with the Tendo girls when they were all little. It's a fascinating twist. The gaijin half-brother was certainly a surprise, but I like it.

Great work. I await your next update! _
Coengar2 2/17/12 . chapter 5
Ok Obsidians, let me start by saying that i'm not always a fan of your stories, although i will confess that there have been a few that i liked.

However, This story has become a guilty pleasure for me. I like watching how Nabiki and Kuno's relationship is developing at a nice slow pace and it is nice to see a Tatewaki who is not portrayed as a raving lunatic but as a responsible person with a controlling streak. A quietly submissive Nabiki is interesting to watch as well.

Hopefully you'll keep adding chapters to this little gem of a story and i'll keep reading them. Keep up the good work
Fuyukazehime 2/16/12 . chapter 4
My only real qualm here is as follows:

It is extremely rare for the ENTIRE main cast of Ranma 1/2 to be in the same location at the same time. Ranma, Ryouga, Akane, Tatewaki, Kodachi, Shampoo, Ukyou, Mousse... I can't remember very many occasions they were all together. What's more is, it seems somewhat casual that they are together... Like they're chumming around or something .

Other than that, this is a... stimulating story :p
tuatara 2/15/12 . chapter 5
Very nice! I'm realy enjoying Kuno here. He's actually pretty in character, which can be tough when making him romantic. Good work!
anon 2/14/12 . chapter 4
No, your right l. Had this been a plan to snag him she would have played it up but Nabiki going into a loveless marriage where she is the one not loved? Never.

Will be fun to see Kuno going after her though, sadly its going to be out of ego to start I think. Things should heat up as he tries to make her marry him though.
tuatara 2/13/12 . chapter 4
This was another great chapter. Nabiki's reaction was excellent. Though I did roll my eyes once at describing her as "the primary breadwinner." But it's such a common fanon trope that I don't really care about that anymore.

Good work yet again. It feels like you're just about done with this one already (but perhaps I'm mistaken) so I look forward to seeing how you wrap it up!
H.Saotome 2/13/12 . chapter 4
Well, I have to admit I didn't foresee the story going in this direction. Not that it isn't logical, but it seems to limit the opportunity for lemons. I suppose Kuno, all confused by her seeming rejection, might do something crazy like sneak into her bedroom to seduce her, as a way of proving to himself that she really does want him. And then they'd get caught again.

Or maybe Nabiki, wanting more, would end up pursuing him.

In any case, you can't stop now. Now you've got to let us know how it turns out.
DiMeraslover 2/13/12 . chapter 4
Excellent. I liked how Cologne took charge for a while. Ranma,Ryoga, Akane, and Soun all too old fashioned. Not counting Genma who has no right to talk about anything. Like he's father of the year. ha. I did like how Kuno was willing to marry Nabiki if she got pregant. Good to see how she laid down the smack on Soun. He needs a reminder of who's paying the bills. It sure as hell has not been him, he's got a lot of stupid for trying to say anything. Heres to Doctor Touf running off with Kasumi and Nabiki going off to colage same with Akane. Leaving Soun to figure out who to pay for stuff. heh. Anyway, great follow threw. You did great with everyone. I compleatly loved how Nabiki told them no and to shut up. Kodachi really does need a good lay then maybe she would be less work as always
H.Saotome 2/11/12 . chapter 3
I think that author's note was a bit over the top, don't you? :)

Of course I'm following it. You're a good writer, it's a cute story (and not yaoi). I quite enjoyed it - although chapter 3 *is* a little sloppier in terms of spelling/grammar/etc.

I think you've misremembered. Chapter 29 was the last chapter I put up. The upcoming chapter will be 30. Assuming my health ever recovers sufficiently that I can find myself with the energy and mood to finish writing it.
DiMeraslover 2/11/12 . chapter 3
Thank you again! I was very happy to see this show up in my box. Nabiki and Tatewaki happly making love sweet. Too bad they did it in the dojo and got busted. Poor Kuno. He really does adore Nabiki. She certainly adores him. I laughed as Soun had a near heart attack. He's such a panys. Ranma oh course has no clue whats gone on. The amazons must be confused yet amused to see young love. Well Colonge anyway. She's been around long enough to understand it. Seeing as how Nabiki and Kuno had no claim on Ranma. Well Tatewaki knowningly. Ryoga of couse faints. poor boy. Kodachi must be thinking well didn't want ot see this. Wonder what daddy will say? But at any rate the Kuno's have the money to take care of things. And I can easly see Tatewaki doing what ever Nabiki wants. Blowing off Soun which well he should. Heck Nabiki has great to excellent grades and is surly wanted by out side japan colages. With a full ride and spending cash. Over all interesting way to unvail them as a couple. lol. I do feel for them, not cool to be seen having sex by family members and people you know. Very nicely done.
tuatara 2/10/12 . chapter 3
Very nice! I'm glad Nabiki had such a good time. _
JeremyGU 2/10/12 . chapter 3
That rather brief mention of Kuno casting Nabiki aside for Akane, and it causing her general coldness, may have solved one of the biggest mysteries of the canon series. That would seriously explain a whole lot. I like the backstory that many fics have used, in which Kuno starts off liking Kasumi, and then keeps switching to the next-younger sister. Nice thinking.
DiMeraslover 2/9/12 . chapter 2
Thank you! I was so happy to see this in my e-box. I liked both of there reactions to what they had done. Tatewaki more or else endeed taking the high ground, which lets face it for a guy his age means he's a good one. I found Nabiki's semi shame to be cute, because while she was kind of upset. She did come back for some more attention. I really liked the look into Kuno's thoughts about the whole affair. I liked how he was both gentlemanly yet had a more modren thought about sex. Nice to see Tatewaki as a more developed person. Than a crazy man, who can't understand that Akane and Ranma don't love him. They both seem to have a liking for each other. Yet not ready to say it out loud. I did however enjoy that Kuno liked Nabiki for her personality. Now if they would both buy a clue. lol. Very very nice follow up to chapter one. the plots great. Wonder read.
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