How sad this time was for Sue. Not a lot is mentioned about these events, but I think you developed what we do know into a very riveting story.

The Fictionators - www(dot)fictionators(dot)com/ has featured your story on our site for the week of 2/17/2012.

Thanks, we really appreciate your contribution to the fandom :)

Hi, K. We do really appreciate you!

Songster for The Fictionators

Oh MAN, that was so good! Really gripping and a great sideshot into the Clearwater's life. I will say there was a little too much vomit for my comfort. LOL! But that's really because I am a big baby.

That was powerful. Very intense and beautifully written. A wonderful look into the Clearwaters on what would have to be the single most life changing night of their lives. You nailed the personalities as I read them, and Sue just leaked all the motherly emotions that we know so well. I really enjoyed this one shot.

Very moving view of Sue's story. Wow, we hardly get to hear her side and it's about as rough as Leah's. She's just a mom trying to work with a lousy hand dealt to her. And though Leah's pretty nasty here, you want to give her a pass because of all she has to deal with as well. The Clearwaters couldn't *buy* a break!

Nicely done!

Really like the start.

Absolutely heart wrenching. I'm at a complete loss! Poor Sue...I can't even imagine what she went through.

Despite Leah's pre-werewolf anger and attitude, I have such sympathy for her. Carrying the knowledge that her transformation triggered her father's heart attack. It would certainly explain her subsequent anger at the world.

Great story, thanks for writing!

Really well written fic. It broke my heart.

Original story, very well written!

It was absolutely one of my favorites in the Canon tour!

- Raum

Amazing story! I have loved all your stories, and I know we share similar hearts in regards to family...so to see Sue's role as a mother and wife here, it is incredibly moving.

Great job!

Wonderful. Terribly sad,but wonderfully written. x

Wow, that was amazingly written look at Sue's POV of what happened to her family. Talk about traumatic.

Since all the reviews for the Canon Tour get lost after the contest is over, I wanted to give your wonderful story some love here too. I'm generally not a reader of fanfic centering on the wolves, but wow, this one really held my attention. I've never thought much of the wolves side of things and thinking the Clearwaters were going through all this horror really made me sympathetic for their and the wolves plight. Very well done!