|Reviews for Chapter 1: The Audition|
| Jade01theHedgehog 2/25/12 . chapter 3
Good Job! There are a few spelling errors though...
| PrincessDiMimi 2/23/12 . chapter 3
Ohhh mannn! I see a very twisty plot coming in! This sounds really good, I can't wait till you update again! UPDATE SOON!:D
| PrincessDiMimi 2/23/12 . chapter 2
I cracked up when Lars started talking. He's got pretty nice man breasts ahaha! Great chapter! (:
| PrincessDiMimi 2/23/12 . chapter 1
Great first chapter, you did a pretty great job with describing the situation! I really like your character so far, she seems pretty gnarly (:
| Jade01theHedgehog 2/16/12 . chapter 2
This is a really good chapter! But why is it rated T?
| Jade01theHedgehog 2/9/12 . chapter 1
Good but WAY to short.