so beautiful but where is Alan?

Having buried too many rellies over my 51 years (including both parents, my mum's parents, my father-in-law), it's never easy to say that last goodbye.

*Sobs* That was so sad!

How sad and true. I remember looking at my grandmother one last time. Remember jumping when i felt her cold skin. It wasn't the way i wanted to remember her. So that afternoon when everyone had to say goodbye for the last time i staid at home. I'll remember her always.

This is so sad but beautifully written. My heart broke for poor Scott blaming himself, but I loved how Jeff rushed in to comfort his son. The funeral was very nicely done and Jeff's goodbye made me testy. Great work.

So totally heartbreaking seeing Scotty blam hjimself for his mother's death, thinking that his father hated him because of it. That scene brought tears to my eyes. I'm glad Jeff burst into the room to show him how wrong he was!

Awwwwww..you got me reaching for my hankies! Lovely, sad...Very nice story.

Now that was really sweet I really enjoyed it. Great work xx