THIS WHOLE FIC. I frigging loved it. it was so heartbreakingly Catcher In the Rye-esque its not even a joke! poor Sam can't catch a break. but i want him to be with Mercedes so bad.

you are an excellent writer because i could feel his pain, and the awkwardness and the hurt and the empty unending lonlieness. frigging aye I cried. this was genius!

This? Was awesome. What a great look into what's going on in Sam's head. Loved it.

I love how you've characterised Sam in this, honestly. Its great! And I love the whole Sam/Puck exchange, it was entertaining and a bit truthful, really. Sam can be too nice, and I like how you've captured that feeling in this.

I like the fact that you are writing Sam/Mercedes fics.

I liked the realism that goes with this fic, Sam likes Mercedes, Mercedes likes Sam, but Mercedes is in a relationship with Shane, so there is no immediate gratification of Sam/Mercedes together.

I also liked reading Sam's muddlings, such a typical teenage boy with a modicum of angst.

Bravo!

Aaaaah. You continue to write the best Sam fics. This was written so well and ughh, poor Sam. It really seems like the boy can't win. :'( The part where Sam says he never really got his chance just broke my heart. I particularly loved how you wrote his talks with Puck and Shane because they were all believably in character (or in Shane's case, you gave him a believable personality because the show hasn't really tried at all) Especially Sam, who's just so nice a guy it's almost a flaw. :')

Thank you so much for sharing!

I love the way you write him. It was totally believable character work! And it made me sad at the end, but at least he gets an outlet to let his frustrations and just gets to feel all sides of the ramifications of what's been going on because of his pursuits. Thanks for sharing...

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This was really nicely done. I think you did a great job with this and I hope to read more from you. Keep up the lovely work!

My heeeeeeeart. I love this so much, and I love Sam so much, and I also really appreciate what you did with Shane. You turned Glee just not giving him any good lines into him just being a super straightforward dude who still had a clear personality, and that's hella impressive.

Also your Puck was perfection, but like, it's you, so I'm not surprised.

Wow, this is so sad! I'm crying for Sam and sort of mad at Mercedes now. She need to make a decision and stop giving mixed signals! Great story!

This was heartbeaking! Poor Sam! i loved the story. I hope Mercedes doesn't string Sam along forever. The boy came from Kentucky for her. He deserves the truth! I think they'll end up together in the end. I hope so!

Ok, I haven't been watching this show since Sue's sister died last season b/c I freaking hate it. I have no ideas waht's going on, who Shane is.. is CHord OVerstreet back..? Really? but this was interesting as all of your writing is. I hate Quinn and I am NOT a fan of Mercedes so I really have no opinion on who should be with Sam.

P.S. DAMN your computer! I am desperately awaiting Best days of your life!

This is so fabulous. It's originality is like a breath of fresh air. I think you really nailed not only Sam but the relationships that he has with Shane and Puck and Finn. Excellent work.

Sam will win. I believe!

Wow.

That was funny and so well written!

Love the way you wrote the inner workings of Sam's mind - honestly, this is EXACTLY how I thought he must've felt during TST...

Great update - sorry about your other story being lost (that really sucks!):{

I liked that tone that you used. It was a lot more conversational and sounded a lot more like a teenage boy venting his frustrations about love. And I loved that inner dialogue about how he's frustrated about being the nice guy, how he realizes he never had a chance. It's a real and fresh way of writing Sam. I really enjoyed it!