|Reviews for Sounding Heartbeats, Intimidations|
| Emma 11/5/12 . chapter 2
Please write more a. It's so dark lovely and twisted. I hope they fall in love somehow
| D 7/20/12 . chapter 2
Game on! Update please.
| EvelynCharlotte 7/14/12 . chapter 2
Oh my god, I think I have an unhealthy obsession with dark Sebtana. I'm so glad you're not going to end up with them falling in love or some cheesy unrealistic crap like that - we have enough of those Sebtana stories. And I'm also glad you're not going to put Brittana as endgame either because I never really liked Brittana (and here come the haters). I like the idea of Santana ending up alone - not because she deserves it, but because it makes the most sense and makes the most interesting story. Anyway, I really hope you can complete this story - it's really good.
| Guest 7/7/12 . chapter 2
Really dark chapter before and then this chapter. They are both good but it would have been awesome to see what twisted revenge Santana could come up with to get back at Sebastian.
| azab 4/29/12 . chapter 2
| KirstyD 4/27/12 . chapter 2
omg i just came across this story, i really like it hope you're going to continue this!
| Delightful Panda 3/11/12 . chapter 2
This was really good! I got a bit confused throughout the first and the second chapter transition but it was just a simple mistake. I understand everything now. I can't wait for the next one!
| Wulfie 3/10/12 . chapter 1
Definitely keep it Sebtana. This is wonderful as it is, I love dark!abusive!sebastian.
| CadenceofRain 3/3/12 . chapter 2
Interesting shift in tone from the last chapter. I like how chapter 1 was insanely dark and set this up as a no-hope scenario, but 2 turns it into one in which there is hope and it almost becomes a game. A sick, depraved game with both sides being extremely unlikeable people, but that works perfectly. When you've got two 'bad' characters against each other, things become more interesting.
It's nice to see Santana not going down without a fight, and I can't wait to see what clever manipulations and tactics she employs during this. She clearly knows what she wants and what she can and can't get away with, and it'll be fun to see just how badly she and Sebastian end up getting hurt. Not only that, but how the other characters get involved and are affected by this mess also seems like something that will be interesting to watch.
The writing was good, and I especially like the character interaction between these two. The rules of their game are constantly shifting second by second, with each person reaching the other's weak points with great efficiency. The entire parental angle is something that could sabotage this plan, and I get the feeling that everyone involved, not just these two, is going to end up hurting due to this.
As for the direction that this is going according to your note, I like what you're thinking. The alternative just seems odd, and this is more of a power struggle than anything meaningful. Can't wait to see who ends up bleeding and why when all is said and done...
| Britty 3/3/12 . chapter 2
Such a great story, very well written, love the darkness it's taken on. Can't wait for more!
| Leyla132 3/1/12 . chapter 1
Oh i love this chapter, good for santana! we don't need to know the endgame yet thats what gives the story suspense. And britanna background focus fine with me not a big fan of the ship. Keep up the good work!
| missingviolet 3/1/12 . chapter 2
Eiks I hope there will be a fairly good ending to this! Please keep the brittana longer?
| FireQueen88 2/29/12 . chapter 2
I've been having the worst week ever and this update just made everything so much better! I've been waiting and dying for and update. I really love this story! I can't wait to see what you do with the Kurt and Santana confrontation about Sebastian and I really can't wait to see what happens at dinner!
Can't wait for chapter 3! Please update soon!
| princessNyxxx 2/29/12 . chapter 2
I'm so glad you didn't weaken Santana after this experience. It wouldn't be right if she didn't come out claws drawn and battle ready. Great chapter.
| R5Fanatic 2/29/12 . chapter 2
OMGOMOGMOGMOGMOGMOGM MOREE PLEASE