Damn, can't help but wonder if Trevor and Kaiten are gone for good now, or if by being part of the soul cycle thing they will try to fix it from within, well actually got to many possible ideas to really guess what you plan next but whatever it is I'm possitive it'll be more good writing and story. Shame it has to end soon (bar you adding more extra stuff of course), but anyway, keep up the good work on Shattered Minds and hope to see more soon.

WHAAAT? YOU KILLED HIM? Well done!

Haha I always really like it when the main character dies. It's very unconventional and you hardly ever see it coming (Harry Potter does NOT count). Not only that, but you made everyone else's reactions to his death pretty realistically. A little bit of reminiscence (but not too much, because then it gets sappy), and a bit of guilt and whatnot. Well done indeed! XD

Anyways, I would LOVE to see how you proceed with this, since Trevor's, well, dead.

Keep writing!

-D3athrav3n92

I believe that you have pulled off the biggest plot twist in a Self Insert story yet. You actually killed off the SI character but is he really dead? I mean the story revolved around Trevor up to this point and is there any point in continuing? For that reason I think Trevor will come back somehow despite how impossible it would be.

Holy... What the... I mean...

Jesus. This didn't end on a cliffhanger. This WAS a cliffhanger, or rater, dropping OFF a cliffhanger.

The battle was great. I loved how Vivi tranced and owned Tiamat, but I'm way to stricken to leave a really good review now.

Shit... Just what are you up to, Krim?

Till next time, and keep up the great work!

HOW COULD YOU!

I couldnt review last chapter under the fear that I would lash out due to the nasty cliff hanger. When I saw that you had updated I though, "yes, answers are coming!"

But they never came.

You only served to cause more questions. Is he really dead? Where are the other spectral knights...? If you truly did kill off Trevor then I commend you on the biggest plot twist on the history of self inserts. Only you would have the guts and talent to pull this off. But something is nagging in the back of my brain that warns me that you have something up your sleeve. I guess we shall see what the future brings to this epic tale.

You managed to capture the emotion of each character perfectly on a level parrallel to Terry Goodkind. I even felt myself really feeling for them and what they were going through.

Just an outstanding job and can't wait for more! Keep it up.

The end has just begun...

-Solark

Wow, that was some great writing Krimson, it almost got me crying, and that doesn't happen much in fanfics. Now, I won't be like "I hate you Krimson!" for killing him while there were two more fiends and then Kuja. He hasn't even faced Garland yet. There might probably be an explanation to this, maybe centering Memoria or something. Their memories will bring him back. Just a theory.

The worst thing was: the whole time I was gibbering incoherently about how Trevor /can't/ be gone, he just can't! I knew that THAT is exactly how you want us to react. Because if I wrote this chapter, I'd be sitting back and laaaughing at all the reviews rolling in about how we hate you now.

Now to wait for another month to roll by...

...NNNNOOOOOOOO! NO! NO! NO! How could you do that to Trevor, Krimson? You're so heartless! Meanie! Okay, I'm done being angry. This chapter was so sad. It made me wanna cry. And poor Vivi! (hugs Vivi plushie). I don't think Trevor's gonna stay dead though. Otherwise there'd be no point continuing this story since Trevor's the main character and this story revolves around him. His earthly body possibly? Or is there a chance Kaiten's body is still around? So many possibilites...I wonder which you'll choose...or maybe his current body which got burned may come back because it was phoenix flames! Haha!I think I might've figured it out. We'll see. But I have to wait another month...(groan). Hikari needs to read more. Hikari needs to read more NOW! She demands update! Update NOW! I doubt my childish demands will be met though. Can't wait!

So Trevor really is dead, body smash then cremation, I can really say I almost felt like crying.

The most bad part about it was that it happen at the 2nd fiends with 2 more to go and kuja.

I would love to see Trevor come back by any mean.

's bein' stupid. That's beside the point, though, you asshole. I am highly tempted to ask for your number so I can give my heartfelt rage and irritation in a more personal way. At least I'd be able to tell you a few things I plan on doing to you, such as beating the shit out of you with a few dozen flipflops.

-GC

Well you killed of trevor but why do I have the feeling that he isn't quite gone.

Have in mind that the only thing that I will say is that if you don't update I will appear in your dreams at night and kill you from the inside... just because you're evil with your readers with your cliffhangers T_T

*Gapes at the end of chapter* Wow, this... I'm... I'm speechless.

Though you've more or less confirmed Trevor's deaths by all the party members and showing what's left of him to readers such as myself, I'm still skeptical.

. Is Trevor really dead? You've thrown too many curveballs the past four books to really make me be able to grasp it... but I don't know what you had in mind either. Does Trevor's original body had something to do with it?

When Vivi swore at Tiamat, I seriously gaped and froze in shock at the screen. But it's understandable: poor kid was PISSED!

About Amarant fighting and then sharing a beer with Trevor... why can't I remember that? o_o I don't remember reading something like that... and I thought I would have, since Amarant's one of my faves.

Anyway, what an action filled turned touchingly emotional chapter! It's really nice to read about the other characters' thoughts of him. Confirms that despite Trevor's illogical actions, they still appreciate what he's done. Especially Freya. Seriously, Cleyra would have been destroyed if it weren't for Trevor's presence!

Kind of sad, but another good chapter, Krims!

God DAMMIT, KRIMS! That is the WORST cliffhanger as of yet! DX What did you just DO?

It looks like you killed Trevor off! o_o I don't even know how you could work on a chapter following that (unless it's from the party's POV, but I digress)!

*sighs* Guess I'll have to wait til the next chapter.

I like the encounter between Bahamut and Tiamat. Gives those two a backstory that we can imagine. And unlike Trevor, I'm not worried about Bahamut. He got blown to smithereens by Alexander, and he's fine.

Funny thing. When I looked at gameplay videos, I JUST noticed that Tiamat has only one head in the Wind Shrine, and Maliris having only one pair of arms. But they both got two extra heads and another pair of arms respectively in Memoria. *headdesk* How can I call myself a FFIX fan and not notice that...? ;_;

And poor poor Kaiten here in this chapter. The guy needs a hug now more than ever. Well, Trevor too, of course. ;

Oh well, who can stop me? *hugs them both* XD