Hey, no fair its not finished!

Whoo! Go Sara- whoop his ass!

I knew I should have checked to see if you finished this story too! What's up with that? This and "When it All Comes Crashing Down". Two great stories with no endings? Why'd ya give up? It should be a crime! Although remember: it's better late than never. Care to finish either (or both) of these? Please? (-)

oh you are mean ;) why didnt you finish this story? the beginning was just great!

This was really good. When are you going to finish it?

ACH! U JUST HAD 2 STOP IT THERE DIDNT U? WELL...FINE THEN! GRRRRRRR :p PLZ E-MAIL ME WHEN THE NEXT ONE GOES UP

OOOOH-I love this story so much. An update, please...! I know you're working diligently on your other fic, but this one is so awesome too! Can't wait for you to continue...

So cruel! You probably eat nails for breakfast! Don't leave it like this! I guess I'm just a peeper - want to see what happens next (LOL). Please hurry up with the rest!

More soon please.

Love the way you're building the tension here...we can really feel how Sara is getting wound up and Grissom's getting worried. Plus, lovely PSV/UST moment in the hallway-a short moment, but suggest so much. Nice to see they can still mindmeld, even when she's upset too. Good N/S friendship scene, too. Overall, great job w/ the characterizations! :-)

PLEEEEEEEASE WRITE MORE! This is great!

very good. Keep it up! Next chapter soon please!

hey this is a great story! please continue

Please continue soon. I can't wair for the next chapter. I like the stories about Sara...she is my fave CSI character.

Hi!

I really like where this is going, and I want to know more about the girl. I am getting a lot of vibes about a S/N friendship, but also am confused about the G/S thing, so thats a little confusing. Also, I had one thing about the beginning. To me, I thought it was Sara who was pushed out the window. Is it kind of a flah forward, and it really it Sara, or is it just about the homicide of the college girl? I admit that confused me a litte. Ok, now that I've been critical, I'll give happy news. I really liked the Incubus, and the Three Doors Down lyrics, and I thought it was clever how the music showed the feelings of the charachters. I also liked the fact that you had Nick outsmart Sara a couple times, because sometimes he is labeled as kind of stupid, but I don't think that's right because like you are portraying him, he is pretty smart. I really like your story, and I can't wait for more!

*Katharine*