|Reviews for When It's Right|
| delia cerrano 2/11/12 . chapter 2
Really liked it. Jack sounds like he could be Hotch's son.
And he sounds like he would welcome Rossi on a permanent basis.
Will there be more? Like Rossi/Hotch couple.
| hxchick 2/11/12 . chapter 2
Awwww, I LOVED this story! The way Dave spoke to Jack and reassured him was so sweet!
| mummacass 2/11/12 . chapter 2
this story was absolutely beautiful. I just love the way that Jack asked for more information before making his decision...definitely Hotch's son!
| rockhotch31 2/11/12 . chapter 2
Another beautiful chapter. I love your writing style. And could read Hotch/Rossi/Jack stories all day! Thank you!
| Flowerfairy30 2/11/12 . chapter 2
That was sweet. Thank you for the smile.
| Thn0715 2/11/12 . chapter 2
Aw! That was sweet. I like that Dave felt he needed Jack's blessing before marrying Aaron. It really showed how important Jack was to him. Good stuff!
| lastcrazyhorn 2/11/12 . chapter 2
*sniffles* Jack Hotchner is so smart!
| delia cerrano 2/9/12 . chapter 1
Oh I really like this story. I even like Jack. Usually he's kind of a "space holder" - not much in anybody's story nor much personality. I've never liked Hotch either but he seems more real or human somehow. Haven't read a story about Rossi
& Hotch together before.
| mummacass 2/9/12 . chapter 1
I think Dave is trying to ask Jack if he'd mind him and HOtch getting married? That's my opinion anyway.
| p95000 2/9/12 . chapter 1
Loved the back and forth with Dave and Jack. Jack is definitely Aaron's son. Liked Jack telling Dave his house is wayyyy better than the stinky apartment daddy picked after mommy went away. Wish the show would use Jack and Henry more.
Looking forward to chapter 2.
| rockhotch31 2/9/12 . chapter 1
Absolutely loved this! Jack certainly is Aaron Hotchner's son. Can't wait for chapter 2!
| lastcrazyhorn 2/9/12 . chapter 1
Poor Jack. *puppy dog eyes*
| MaryEllen1960 2/9/12 . chapter 1
OH..I like this. but what a place to stop...I want to know what Rossi says to the pint-sized profiler!
Thanks for *another* story to watch for updates for with bated breath!
| SunnyInOregon 2/9/12 . chapter 1
Love seeing Dave interact with Jack. I have a feeling I know where this is going but I am going to be patient and see what you have written. Please don't take forever to post part 2. Thank you. I just wonder if you meant to write Mommy in the last paragraph rather than mMmmy. Otherwise - excellent job!