This is so subtly creepy; it's fantastic. And I LOVE that you've managed to keep Smith and Neo in character. Excellent fic.

M, I DO like this. It has some very nicely written, clever passages, such as:

"Admittedly, the method he used was a very good one when it came to distractions and Thomas wasn't going to be complaining anytime soon."

AND Smith gets Neo in a way that makes sense. I'll join with others in calling for a continuation/sequel.

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I like your fics. Some might find them a bit odd - but that's the beauty of it, isn't it? Btw, I love Snape too.

nice!

I liek

Wow! I was thinking of something along those exact lines! hey! (checks apartment for bugs, finds none) Okay then.

I always wanted Neo to end up with Smith if he failed to save humanity. Hee. Naughty agent. Very naughty indeed.

But you realize that you will have to flesh out those flashbacks. Why the hell would Neo kill Morpheus? PLEASE CONTINUE!

Oh... my... gawd... this is incredible. So very, very , very incredible. I love this. his is great. *swoons* I love the implications, the subtlety, the everything, actually...

Oh GAWD, this is lovely. I just adore the whole dream thing, the slash pairing... Oh Gawd... (grin) this is very powerful stuff. I also like the fact that, as with all your tales, one must read carefully; a casual read is still a powerful experience, but the careful read shows so much wonderful detail!

I esp. love the part where Smith has had his bad day, and hot sex makes it all better... (grin) I can definitely see that!

VERY nice job. Would love to see more along this line!

Whoa. That was very weird but very cool. Could I possibly convince you to write more in this storyline? This could be a first chapter to something bigger and really, really cool. So many questions were raised, and so many possibilities opened. I liked it a lot.

what i want to know is, what did neo do once he got unplugged? why did he have to kill morpheus to save trin and the baby?

you'd had better write a sequel!

great story ) although i didnt really get the last part...'

Woah.

Just... woah.

Very nice. Very screwed up. But very, very, very nice. You rock.

I was about to give you a bad review, but then I went back and actually *read* it instead of skimming through, and it wasn't that bad. Something tells me Smith wouldn't be, erm, *intimately* involved with the previous One, but I guess it works for this story line. I think maybe it could do with a little more explaining, but it really wasn't that bad.

WEIRD WEIRD WEIRD! But my glowing and insane id just loves it. :) Keep it up.

Nice. I like the dream sections... so that you have to think about what happened rather than just be told. And the last bit: he knows he's done something terrible and it's all for nothing... very powerful.