| Reviews for The Machine's Symphony |
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TheWeasleyBoys 3/11/12 . chapter 1Well, well, well! Do I smell a masterpiece coming on, or what? It'll be interesting to know how the technology/society/etc. has changed in 1000 years, if I may say so. Nice start so far, please continue! :) Weasley |
Nova Sinfonia 2/21/12 . chapter 1Hey, this is an interesting concept. I'd like to read more. I was interested in the characters and startled to read that Alex's brother died, but it provides a good set-up. One thing, though - I think setting it in the next millennium is too far into the future (who knows what will happen then?) but that's my only criticism. |
Dan Sickles 2/12/12 . chapter 1Wow, this is certainly an original set up! I like how you lay out the basic premise and describe things with great originality. Have you ever read a book called TORTILLA FLAT by John Steinbeck? It is very similiar to your "new Robin Hood" approach! |