 Pseudo Twili 2/23/12 . chapter 2Oh dear, naughty Zelda... I never imagined her as such a little troublemaker. Hehe...
This chapter was wild. I felt sorry for Instructor Horwell. Poor guy! That explains how all that equipment gets into his room. I do think he would have been better with Mia because he's an expert with animals.
By the way, Mia is a remlit. I understand why people mistake her for a cat; she makes mewing sounds. I thought she was a strange kind of cat when I first saw her, until I asked Fi and she told me those creatures were called remlits. They are like demons at night! |
 CryBabyCry 2/22/12 . chapter 2Another amazing chapter! Now we know hoe good Link and Zelda's relationship is, I do think it's ready to introduce the other kids. C8
And omgggggg I am so excited for what you have planned for for the hand in the toilet LOL as creepy as that sounds. xD I drew what I imagined her to look like when she was alive, or at least if she was reincarnated...I was just trying to think up a story for her, but I'm curious to see what you have Please update soon! |
 CryBabyCry 2/22/12 . chapter 1oh my god
I KNEW I RECOGNIZED THAT SCENE! QUQ IT WAS FROM A LITTLE PRINCESS!
I love you forever. -heart- dude, I swear, that movie leaves me in tears every single time I watch it. And that scene fits perfectly in with this part It was very well written, despite the grammar errors, but good enough to keep me hooked. :3 Keep up the great work |
 MasterIcePhoenix 2/19/12 . chapter 2These stories are funny, you should keep writing. |
 Spaghetti 2/19/12 . chapter 2 Amazing work, I love the detail you give the Zelda's actions. She acts exactly like a little girl would. The scene with the cookies made me thing of Angelica Pickles hahaha |
 RainyBay 2/9/12 . chapter 1That was great! :D keep writing! |
 RainyBay 2/9/12 . chapter 1That was great! :D keep writing! |
 Pseudo Twili 2/9/12 . chapter 1Chapter One is charming. I felt so sorry for poor Link. Zelda is a a darling. I will be interested to read about the other people of Skyloft and the histories you'll give them. Keep up the good work! |
 Debbie 2/9/12 . chapter 1 Holy Crap that was awesome. A very good way to have Zelda and Link meet. I love your theory on Skyloft's angel thingies. I can almost imagine a little Zelda. Your detail is great. My two favorites was when Zelda was stomping away and you mentioned how her pigtails bounced, and when she was telling link to be quiet because he was "eapposed" to. Very good storytelling about 5 year olds hahaha. Can't wait to read more. |