Keep on writing! I think that this could really go somewhere. I will seriously keep on reading if you keep on writing.

I hope this isn't the very end of the story! I love Lana and Clark together for a change. Please continue with this story. Great Job.

Ooh! I hope this doesn't reeally happen! (I love chloe!)

Wow! That was so great! I totally loved it! Your Lana characterization was dead on!

it's nice to read something about what goes through lana's mind for a change. great work. :D

this was good, keep up the good work:)

love the last line

aww! thankeez for writing this, this is sooo perfect to read! its all clark lex slash. not that i mind, i love it too, but still, i love lana and clark more..and there are so few! *falls over with happiness* aww...Bye bye!