Oh my god, cliffhanger.

I'm in the middle of reading, but I just wanted to say THIS IS AWESOME.

First person, then switch to third person and back to first again. Since I'm one of those guys who frown upon writing in anything other than third person, dialog and quotes excluded, I'd like to point that out.

Other than that, it's a good read. Bookmarked it in case I feel like reading it again.

This story was... AMAZING!
No, more than amazing. It's one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Now then, where is the sequel?
Not wanting to rush you or anything, but you are an amazing writer and I would really like for this to get a sequel, or something like that...
You making Wheately the villain really made this story different. I like it.

Awesome

Im glad chell lives! If she didnt one of us would have hunted you down. There is alot of us (as shown in those awsome credits). Its fun seeing your fake name on a storie you didnt write but obsesevly checked your email for because you wanted more;).

If i were Chell i would keep the long fall boots. I hope you
come back to this storie because there are a bunch of
branches i can see the storie going off on, even if they dont
involve chell.

On a side note... Dose any one know what happend to black measa? Its mentiond i think in half life 2 that a test goes wrong but thats all i know.

Ummm... what?
That could just mean that he died with open eyes.

Great job putting the ending itno your own words!

On behalf of everyone who reads this:

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU WITH NEUROTOXIN!

That story was awesome,as a result,
I shall not fill your lungs with neurotoxin,however you shall remain testing untill you expire,
so chop chop you only have 60 more years left give or take.

Cool stuff! I want the last non offical chapter! A chapter exploring the time when Black Maesa was still active would be cool. You could write about the people there, what they stole and if they came up with any origanle tec.

continue and its very good

Chapter 11was just amazing I loved the friendship.

Why do good guys never kill bad guys dead? If it were me, after shoting him i would beat his inhanced brains out. Ho and GLaDOS is spelled like that... Just learnd that.

This all seems to easy... Even with a super computer ninja, maby its a trap. I gusse i will find out. This is realy good matireal. I love GLaDES as a android because ronots in potal are sooo well designd. But now i am off to read more (if my internet dosnt fail like it has 3 times).